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The Management Says:
autis, May 13th, 2008, 10:52 pm ( Reply )


I am churning these out because I AM OFFICIALLY DONE WITH APS. YAY.
and I'm procrastinating from Gaia commissions. D:
and this page is boring and didn't deserve its own major update.

Also. PLEASE FEEL FREE TO CRITIQUE THE COMIC.
Besides the crappy line quality. That's just from using the pencil tool. =/




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Rizu, May 13th, 2008, 11:11 pm ( Reply )


Ooooohhh god that's a cute grin in the last panel. XD I love itttt. Actually I pretty much adore all of the expressions in this comic ;___; AND THE SOLID COLORS AND LINES I LOVE THOSE SO MUCH I CAN'T GET OVER IT.

but if you really waaannnnttt critique, i would say uuummmm... backgrounds, i think. even for something so simple, it looks really nice in the forth panel. it does a lot to ground them.
i realize that the other panels would be harder to do backgrounds for, since there's so little actual space to draw a background in, but that's possibly another point. it's easy to draw a page full of bust shots, especially when they're having a conversation without much action, but to stretch your brain maybe you could consider different... angles, say, that would allow a background. for example, that first panel might look gook if it were, like, an extreme perspective close up of the hand/cup, with Mark in the background, and scenery behind that?

JUST A THOUGHT, JUST A THOUGHT. i totally love it the way it is. *____*


Rizu, May 13th, 2008, 11:12 pm ( Reply )


also, your censor is amazing. XD SO MUCH LOVE.


amiko_16, May 14th, 2008, 8:44 am ( Reply )


LAWL @ censor >XD

*flail* I crit writing, not art. Especially if someone's art is so much better than mine XD So I will just be your little annoying cheerleader instead.


fall forever, May 14th, 2008, 9:26 am ( Reply )


Your censor boxes pwn'd the world. :D


kay osse, May 14th, 2008, 5:41 pm ( Reply )


i likes it so far.

what version of photoshop do u use? u should try using the brush tool. it ives out smoother lines.

i usualy make a layer for lines that goes over the color layers.

but i love ur coloring and ur art =)


animegirl, May 14th, 2008, 7:35 pm ( Reply )


uuuuuupppppddddaaaaaaaaaaaate.

and I like her cool sketchy style.Wacha *thumbs up*


Enzie, May 20th, 2008, 8:45 pm ( Reply )


Okay, I will comment coherently now :) Still awesome D: even after AP exams. Wtf come live with me so I can do copyright infringement on your artworks and make large profits off of you :) OH BTW....you're still amazing D:


Kuragari Okami, May 23rd, 2008, 11:10 pm ( Reply )

Ignore Me!
I love this! Marks eyebrows EYEBROWS!XD and his drinking face is cute! and the censor!and...and..Silas *squee*
*flails then dies*


tayburger, May 29th, 2008, 10:55 pm ( Reply )


lol. HOLY WASTE!!


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