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autis, May 13th, 2008, 10:52 pm ( Reply )

I am churning these out because I AM OFFICIALLY DONE WITH APS. YAY.
and I'm procrastinating from Gaia commissions. D:
and this page is boring and didn't deserve its own major update.

Besides the crappy line quality. That's just from using the pencil tool. =/

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Rizu, May 13th, 2008, 11:11 pm ( Reply )

Ooooohhh god that's a cute grin in the last panel. XD I love itttt. Actually I pretty much adore all of the expressions in this comic ;___; AND THE SOLID COLORS AND LINES I LOVE THOSE SO MUCH I CAN'T GET OVER IT.

but if you really waaannnnttt critique, i would say uuummmm... backgrounds, i think. even for something so simple, it looks really nice in the forth panel. it does a lot to ground them.
i realize that the other panels would be harder to do backgrounds for, since there's so little actual space to draw a background in, but that's possibly another point. it's easy to draw a page full of bust shots, especially when they're having a conversation without much action, but to stretch your brain maybe you could consider different... angles, say, that would allow a background. for example, that first panel might look gook if it were, like, an extreme perspective close up of the hand/cup, with Mark in the background, and scenery behind that?

JUST A THOUGHT, JUST A THOUGHT. i totally love it the way it is. *____*

Rizu, May 13th, 2008, 11:12 pm ( Reply )

also, your censor is amazing. XD SO MUCH LOVE.

amiko_16, May 14th, 2008, 8:44 am ( Reply )

LAWL @ censor >XD

*flail* I crit writing, not art. Especially if someone's art is so much better than mine XD So I will just be your little annoying cheerleader instead.

fall forever, May 14th, 2008, 9:26 am ( Reply )

Your censor boxes pwn'd the world. :D

kay osse, May 14th, 2008, 5:41 pm ( Reply )

i likes it so far.

what version of photoshop do u use? u should try using the brush tool. it ives out smoother lines.

i usualy make a layer for lines that goes over the color layers.

but i love ur coloring and ur art =)

animegirl, May 14th, 2008, 7:35 pm ( Reply )


and I like her cool sketchy style.Wacha *thumbs up*

Enzie, May 20th, 2008, 8:45 pm ( Reply )

Okay, I will comment coherently now :) Still awesome D: even after AP exams. Wtf come live with me so I can do copyright infringement on your artworks and make large profits off of you :) OH BTW....you're still amazing D:

Kuragari Okami, May 23rd, 2008, 11:10 pm ( Reply )

Ignore Me!
I love this! Marks eyebrows EYEBROWS!XD and his drinking face is cute! and the censor!and...and..Silas *squee*
*flails then dies*

tayburger, May 29th, 2008, 10:55 pm ( Reply )


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